The first pose (in the air) looks good and is readable. However, the spin after the first strike is happening a bit too quick. The final pose isn't too strong as well... Too much fore-shortening going on and I think that is making the silhouette a bit weak...
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The first pose (in the air) looks good and is readable. However, the spin after the first strike is happening a bit too quick. The final pose isn't too strong as well... Too much fore-shortening going on and I think that is making the silhouette a bit weak...
my 2 cents...
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